Aries of October
October 23, 2007
In mortal light
a god
unsure
unaware
unnoticed
with a firey halo
dances
Strobe lights
flicker upon
Olympus
epileptic fusion
war
Everything In Red
In mortal light
a god
unsure
unaware
unnoticed
with a firey halo
dances
Strobe lights
flicker upon
Olympus
epileptic fusion
war
October 27, 2007 at 4:10 pm
I really like this poem, Amanda.
It’s short and sharp, mythical overtones and all. The imagery of the second verse is great.
You should keep up your writing. I enjoy it all!